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J'ai un mini vidéo à faire en anglais. Faut que je parle dedans (évidemment) et j'aurais besoin de votre avis sur la construction de mes phrases, voir si elles sont correctes. Prêtez pas attention au contenu, je vous montrerez c quoi sa donne si vous le voulez quand j'aurai terminé.

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Breaking News !
- Hi ! I’m Gabriel Théberge and this is your Fox Flash. In Virginia Beach today, we’ve got big flooding. Gabriel Theshore prepared a report to talk about this event.
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- July 12th, 2011. We passed all day long to the beach, under a beautiful sunshine. 4 p.m. We came back to the campground... And the rain begins ! We are in the car, waiting for the sun to come back.
- It’s raining a little bit. East side, the sky is blue. So, I’ve got a beer and I’m waiting to get out from the hatchback of the car.
- Sky is blue !
- A few minutes and it will be passed...
- The paper towels box was empty this morning... And it is full of water now !
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- There is a little flooding on the campground. The man on the bicycle has water going to his knees !
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- This was an asphalt road this morning...
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- Some people are kayaking now... Pretty strange... She could have been swimming in the street ! Almost... Is this car now considered as an amphibious car ? ... Hey ! I’m recording now !
- Sorry !
- This was Gabriel Theshore, from Virginia Beach.
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- Thank you Gabriel ! This is it for the Fox Flash. Thanks for watching us and see you next time !

Merci !

PS: J'ai pas vraiment corrigé mes affaires donc c normal si ya une coupel de fautes, don't insult me bibeen

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For my oral presentation, I will talk about hockey. I practice this sport since I am 4 years old, so it is something that really interests me. I will make a video in two parts. In the first one, I will talk about my career of hockey player. I began to play hockey at four years old in the “Association de Hockey Mineur de Rimouski” (AHMR). I played in this association for 13 years, and my career of minor hockey player finished in April 2012. I won many tournaments with some different teams, and last year I won the regional competition of the Bas-Saint-Laurent. However, even if I am now too old to play in this association, I still play hockey sometimes with my friends just to have fun, but not in a league anymore. So in this first part, you will see my successes and my failures I had during my minor hockey career.

In the second part, I will talk about my favourite hockey team, the Rimouski Oceanic. Since a few years, I go to the Colisée of Rimouski to watch them playing hockey. Particularly this year, the only games I missed are when I was playing hockey. So I will become a hockey analyst for a couple a minutes and I will make a summary of this LHJMQ team, of its last season and of its history since it moved from Saint-Jean to Rimouski in 1995.

Si quelqu'un a le temps d'y jeter un petit coup d'oeil juste pour voir s'il n'y a pas trop de fautes de syntaxes et de "françissismes" évident.. ^^

In my oral presentation, I will talk about hockey. I practice this sport since I'm 4 years old, so it's something that really interests me. I'll make a video in two parts. In the first one, I'll talk about my minor hockey career. At 4 years old, I began to play hockey in the “Association de Hockey Mineur de Rimouski” (AHMR). I played in this association for about 13 years, but unfortunately, my career finished in April 2012. In my whole career, I won a lot of tournaments with differents teams. For example, last year, I won the Bas-Saint-Laurent regional competition. However, even if I can't play in this association anymore due to my age, I still play hockey with my friends just to have fun, but not as a competition. So in this first part, you will discover my successes and failures that I had during my minor hockey career.

thanks.. et les contraction je les ai pas faite pour que sa prenne plus de place (sa me prenais 1 page) ^^

ok de rien jai fait ca rapidement fak ya pt des places cest pas correct la, mais ca semble meux que ton premier texte...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MeE2Ftwq3nU

Si vous avez un 5 minutes à perdre pour connaitre ma carrière de joueur de hockey ^^

T'as mis ma photo de la brique de Saint John

J'avais pas le choix, ça fittait avec ce que je disais ^^ M'en donne tu la permission ?

Qui je connais dans ton groupe ? ^^

Dominique Coulombe Bessette.. apart sa je sais pas..

Mais sinon, le video est tu pas pire ?

Good video!

Thanks !

criss que t'as un accent jen reviens pas... pire que georges st pierre jcrois

Pas tant que sa là.. Mettons que j'en ai vu des pires..

c sur la ^^

The Big Bad euh... Oursons!

Marcalogy a écrit:

The Big Bad euh... Oursons!

C'était l'effet recherché ^^

Haha

J'ai eu 92% pour ça ! ^^

Nice Job !!!

Marc-André, ou tout autre personne bonne en anglais, pourriez vous jeter un oeil à ce texte svp ?

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The most wonderful movie of all time
Warning ! This message is going to have content !

Cinematography has existed for more than a century. In fact, the first guy to photograph a fast motion picture was Eadweard Muybridge in 1872. He took 24 photos with 24 different cameras. Here’s the final result :


Invention after invention, the quality of the movies became better and better. Charlie Chaplin appeared in a lot of silent movies, and then in the late 1920s, Walter Elias Disney, alias Walt Disney, created “Steamboat Willie”, featuring the most famous mouse of the world, Mickey. And now, in 2012, we can create really amazing stuff with computers. You just have to take a look at “Avatar” to know what I mean.

After this huge and amazing evolution of the cinematographic technology, can we name the most wonderful movie of all time, without any doubt ? Sincerely, I don’t think so. The best movie of my little 4-year-old sister is probably not the same as me.
So let’s change a little bit my question. What’s for you the most wonderful movie of all time ?

Personally, I’d say The Mighty Ducks 2. This movie is my youth. You MUST have seen this movie at least once in your life. If you haven’t, go take a look at this video (this is the final scene of the movie) : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MxJkAQFGEyo .
Yes! United States won the World Hockey Junior Championship against… Hold on to your seat… Iceland !! There are a lot of outlandish things in that movie, but that’s what make it beautiful (sorry, I didn’t want to make a reference to One Direction). First, Iceland is ranked 35th by the IIHF (International Ice Hockey Federation), and only the first 8 nations participate to the World Championship. Another point is that, in a Men’s Championship, the goaltender of United States in a woman. Plus, in a shootout, you can’t make a complete stop. And, finally, United States wear the Mighty Ducks jersey instead of their national jersey.

This is just a 2 minutes clip and we can find all these ambiguities. So, when you watch this movie, just enjoy and don’t look for the mistakes the producers made. Don’t forget that this movie has been made in the 90s, so be indulgent !
So, I talked to you about my favourite movie. Now, it’s your time to talk. Which one is yours ?

Y a-t-il des erreurs frappantes ? Si oui, ce serait très apprécier de m'en faire la remarque.

Invention after invention, the quality of the movies became better and better. --> Ça fait un peu de répétition. Juste un better, ça serait suffisant.

You just have to take a look --> You just have to look.

The best movie of my little 4-year-old sister is probably not the same as me. --> not the same as mine.

World Hockey Junior Championship --> Ah c'mon... WJHC

Très bon texte. T'es bon en anglais Gab.

Thanks Buddy !

Assurance.

Spoiler:

automobile?

Est-ce que la prof est assez jeune pour comprendre les références à Justin Bieber pis à One Direction dans tes textes ?